the embarrassing
situation
i was chatting with dis pretty gal
Though she was just a pal
i was flirting with her
she knew i was kidding with her
I was also chattin with my girlfriend
Our lovley chat was supposed to end
I wanted to make it romantic
B'coz I am a poem fanatic
I typed 'My world lies in your eyes,
There is where my soul lies'
But then there was a little error
My heart was filled with terror
I had written it to the other girl
My mind had began to swirl
The girl asked weather I was drunk
At the moment my heart totally sunk
i felt i had done unforgiveable crimes
I typed in'sorry' a hundred times
But the girl was very merciful
she forgave me and said my poems were beautiful!!!
i was chatting with dis pretty gal
Though she was just a pal
i was flirting with her
she knew i was kidding with her
I was also chattin with my girlfriend
Our lovley chat was supposed to end
I wanted to make it romantic
B'coz I am a poem fanatic
I typed 'My world lies in your eyes,
There is where my soul lies'
But then there was a little error
My heart was filled with terror
I had written it to the other girl
My mind had began to swirl
The girl asked weather I was drunk
At the moment my heart totally sunk
i felt i had done unforgiveable crimes
I typed in'sorry' a hundred times
But the girl was very merciful
she forgave me and said my poems were beautiful!!!
It's a wonderful poem but better improve your grammar ur poem contains a lot of silly mistake
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, I will work on it!!!!
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